Another aspect to the writing of my submissions has been trying to incorporate academic sources on my topics. I have had a bit of trouble regarding finding truly qualified academic sources but have worked hard to integrate the ones I have found. Below is my thought process on how I could incorporate a source into my Working Through The Problems Using PIC submission. It is a rough idea on how I planned on intertwining the source but the reasoning behind me writing out my ideas was to get a general sense of direction in terms of my approach.
Overall my writing for my submissions has proven a challenge for myself from the standpoint that it is the first time in English 1103 that I have had to go back and think critically of my work. I like the concept behind what we're doing though so hopefully my minor difficulties in my writing will prove to be only a small problem.