Another aspect to the writing of my submissions has been trying to incorporate academic sources on my topics. I have had a bit of trouble regarding finding truly qualified academic sources but have worked hard to integrate the ones I have found. Below is my thought process on how I could incorporate a source into my Working Through The Problems Using PIC submission. It is a rough idea on how I planned on intertwining the source but the reasoning behind me writing out my ideas was to get a general sense of direction in terms of my approach.
Overall my writing for my submissions has proven a challenge for myself from the standpoint that it is the first time in English 1103 that I have had to go back and think critically of my work. I like the concept behind what we're doing though so hopefully my minor difficulties in my writing will prove to be only a small problem.
I like how you try to add the academic aspect as well as pointing your own twist on things! Always makes it more interesting (:
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used outside information. I also like how you have your information organized and outline. It seems like the more you organize the information, the better and easier you can determine how to incorporate the information into your writing.
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